I
Like U
Anna
Rohaly
It's
Valentines Day and Valerie sits across the room from Joey. She
watches him laughing with his friends about their third grade teacher
over his bagged lunch of a ham and cheese sandwich and an apple.
Valerie sighs.
“Joey
is so cute,” She said, leaning her head on her hand. Her friend
Theresa takes a sip off of the straw descending into her juice box as
Valerie continues. “I wish he would ask me out for Valentine Day.”
Theresa puts her drink down.
“You
know,” she said, “I bet if he knew how much you liked him he
would ask you out.”
Valerie's
head snaps around to face Theresa, her little brown eyes bright as
her pigtails flop around to catch up with her head.
“What
do you have in mind?” Theresa leans over and whispers into
Valerie's ear. Minutes later, both girls have abandoned their lunch
and are running down the hallways together, pigtails flying, to their
lockers down hall B3. Valerie stops at her locker and clicks in her
combination to the door. She opens the locker. Diging past the papers
topped with red letters, the calender with pictures of the Back
Street Boys, and her oversized World History book, she finds the bag
of candy that Mrs. Zeke gave out in their homeroom. Theresa also
pulls out her bag of candy.
“Here
are some of the little heart candies!” She said, pulling apart a
small plastic bag filled with the pastel hearts all covered with
short logos. “Open yours!”
Valerie
tears her package she found open and together they sift through the
random sayings. “Call me!” “You're Sweet” “Talk 2 Me”
“Kiss Me” “Rising Star” and many other little phrases. The
girls giggle as they look through them. They finally find the one
that they are looking for. It is a pale pink heart about the size of
a penny with the typed words “I Like U.” Very simple and straight
forward.
“Okay,
here is the plan,” Theresa says and then launches into details on
how to plant the heart where Joey will find see it and know it is
from her. The two girls head back towards the cafeteria working out
the kinks of their plan. Entering the noisy room, Theresa stands by
the door and watches as Valerie makes her move. Walking carefully
between the rows of tables and people carrying trays, she walks
towards Joey. He is sitting at the end of the table, right where the
tables break to make space for people to walk. Gliding right past the
table, she lets her hand slide over the plastic surface and drops her
little pink heart by Joey's arm. She quickly walks away and back to
Theresa, heart beating quickly and difficulty breathing.
“Perfect,
he knows it was you!” Theresa said, “Look!”
Valerie
turns and watches as Joey picks up the heart, examines it, and looks
in her direction. His face turns bright red as she waves her fingers
at him and his friends erupt into laughter. He jumps up from the
table and comes vaulting over to her. For months now Valerie had
giggled each time Joey had looked at her, followed him around between
classes like a puppy, and had thought about him constantly. Now was
the moment that he was going to profess his undying love for her. In
her heart, she knew that was his purpose. Valerie's stomach fills
with butterflies as he reaches her.
“What
the heck Valerie!” He yells, holding up the heart. “Why did you
give this to me?” His demand catches her off guard and she steps
back away from him. “All of my friends are laughing at me cause you
gave me this stupid heart. I don't want it.” With that he drops the
heart to the ground, puts his heal over it, and grinds it into pink
dust. Before he can say a word, Valerie turns and runs from the
cafeteria, tears streaming down her cheeks.
Theresa
does not catch up to Valerie until she reaches hallway C1. She grabs
her shoulder, making her stop running away.
“Val,
I'm so sorry! I thought he liked you too!” Theresa says, standing
across from Valerie. Valerie wipes the tears from her face and nods.
Just then the bell rings and the girls are forced into classes with
the streams of fellow middle schoolers and teachers. Valerie walks
into her first class and is met with a hale of spit wads that cling
to the bows in her hair and her pink shirt. She whips up a book
trying to block the spit wades but the boys only change their aim to
her legs. She is only saved when Mr. Coolege comes into the room and
brings the class to order. However, the moment his back is turned,
another wade of paper, blessedly spit free, lands on her lap. She
uncrumples it and reads the squiggly handwriting. “Val
and Joey sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G. First comes love, then
comes marriage, then comes Joey with the baby carriage! Haha! To bad
he doesn't like you.”
Valerie
sets her head down on the table and tries not to cry as Mr. Coolege
begins to ring out the multiplication tables. As soon as the bell
rings, Valerie is out the door like a cannonball. She makes it
through the hallways filled with cruel boys with even crueler jokes.
She turns the last corner to her locker, thinking that the day could
not get any worse.
“How
could I have been so stupid?” She asks herself under her breath,
“As to have a crush on that stupid Joey McClure.”
That
is when she sees him, leaning against the locker right next to hers.
He looks at her and waves, trying to smile.
“Hey
Valerie,” He didn't look so cute anymore. “How was math?”
“None
of your business,” Valerie said, drawing her shoulders back and
refusing to look at Joey.
“Okay,
I was just asking,” He sounded a little discouraged. “Listen, I
really didn't mean what I said in the cafeteria. I really do like you
I just –”
“Decided
to be a complete pig when I told you?” Valerie asked, turning
sharply to look at him, letting a spit ball she missed fly out of her
hair hit him in the face. “You were really really mean to me and I
don't like you any more, so just go away!” She slammed her locker
shut. Before she could walk away though, Joey jumped away from the
lockers and grabbed her arm. Before she could yell at him he leaned
in and kissed her on the cheek. SMACK! Her hand flew around and found
his face before either of them knew what had happened.
“How
dare you!” She yelled and then stopped. “I'm sorry, I shouldn't
have hit you.”
Joey
rubbed his face. “It's okay, I deserved it. I'm gonna go now and –
er – get my backpack.” He walked away and left her standing there
staring after him. As soon as he was out of sit she went running in
the opposite direction to find Theresa.
“THERESA!
HE LIKES ME!” She yelled, “HE KISSED MY CHEEK!”
“Yay!”
The girls jumped up and down, giggling and laughing. “So, what did
you do when he kissed you?” Theresa asked.
“I
kinda slapped him,” she said, grimacing. “Do you think he'll
still like me?”
Theresa
laughed. “I think that if he is willing to kiss you in the hallway,
he will still like you.”
Valerie's
smile spread across her face like sunshine. Linking arms with Theresa
they headed out of the school. “I can't believe he kissed you!”
echoed down the hall behind them.
Five
years later and Valerie and Joey were not dating anymore and Theresa
had moved away to Iowa. After Joey had kissed her in the hallway they
had “dated” for thirty-six days. They had ended after Joey stole
a rubber bouncy ball from Valerie's locker. Ten years later however,
they ended up at the same college. That Valentine's day Joey arrived
at Valerie's door and gave her a little candy heart. “I Like U.”
He then leaned in and gave her a kiss. This time, she did not slap
him.
Adorable story. I feel like the character language didn't match the age well, but the actions were quite suitable for middle schoolers. Also, I would like to see the ending expounded upon a bit. I wanted to see a little bit more story before the close, especially with such a cute wrap-up. Keep writing and rewriting! Nothing is ever perfect!
ReplyDeleteEileen!!!! Yay! I love feedback! I have been told that the language didn't match the age, but I'm never around middle school kids. I'll have to hang out with some people back home who have younger siblings. The ending actually was a "secondary ending" that Charley had us tack on. I'll play with it some more and see what I come up with! Thanks again for the feed back! LOVE IT!
DeleteI'm always happy to read. And I miss you, so this helps ease the pain of not seeing you. Haha.
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